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RE: Destiny: Writers Block Poetry Contest Week 6
Your poem has a nice thought.
critique: (you can still edit your poem)
Line 3
Man can't _____ alone through it. There is a word missing. I think I know what you mean, but I'm not sure. maybe you mean "navigate"?
Line 6
sink should be sinks
Line 8
Got a blessing to_____ through the storm
there should be a word or two there. maybe "make it"?
Hope this helps.
Thanks for your correct. Hopefully one day, my grammar will be good. It' s hard for me.
look online for something called Grammarly. It is free. It will work as you type on steemit. It will point out your spelling and grammar and punctuation. It is an excellent way to learn.
Thanks for your advice. I appreciate it.