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RE: Wash-day (Day 76 of 100 -- Poetry challenge)
I love the tension resting below the surface in your more 'domestic' poems - can really sense the strain and back-and-forth. 'I've seen your plate' for instance, one of those lines it would be easy to pass over, but is much more incisive than it first appears. Just a dinner plate, or a broader expectation from life? Well paced and composed as always :)
I love how you always see the layers as I try and not give it all away so easily. The surface is only a veneer. ;)
Thank you most kindly, it means a lot that you drop.