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RE: THE UNFORGETTABLE MODEL... (Original Poem)
I like the sense of excitment you expresses in this poem. It fit well with the analogy as it gave the impression of the infatuation usually associated with young love. Good work.
Yes... I tried to be, very creative in this poem.
To take it to another level... with feelings.
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it