THE UNFORGETTABLE MODEL... (Original Poem)
I fell in love with her
As she zoomed by
Leaving a trace of smoke behind.
Then she was gone, as fast as she
Came... gone but not forgotten
She was still in my head
That beauty in red...
With her shiny new armor
My dream state Porsche...
Waiting for a dreamer like me
To unite at last with my masterpiece
The unforgettable model...
Thank you all again and I'll see you in the next post.
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Peace and greetings... from @Moonleesteem
Steem us up... Scotty
I like how you led me to think this was about a woman, very clever @moonleesteem, I am not really into cars, but Porsche cars are beautiful, nice poem
Thanks... yes I wanted to write a different kind of love story.
Something for the mind and eyes 👀
I like the sense of excitment you expresses in this poem. It fit well with the analogy as it gave the impression of the infatuation usually associated with young love. Good work.
Yes... I tried to be, very creative in this poem.
To take it to another level... with feelings.
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it
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Hope your dream comes true
Thanks mate