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RE: A poem and a doodle.

in #poetry7 years ago

@girlbeforemirror,

"Emotive" ... very.

Fictional or not, it feels real ... and that's the trick. I saw this poem as if I was viewing it with my own eyes ... despite the fact that there was not a single visual cue throughout. It triggered my mind to 'create a scene' that could 'hold the story.'

That's ENGAGEMENT. When a person's mind becomes that involved, the story becomes 'theirs too' as they become co-authors in its creation. This is powerful mojo and the most any poet can ever hope for.

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It was most definitely tethered to reality. That is the key. Draw on your experience and ambiguously utilise it's affect, then deny that it is yours.
All "art" is a dimension of self portraiture or perhaps in writing self projection. It gives you permission however to distance yourself and claim fiction.
I used a tag to that effect at some point, something like realityhidinginfiction... Or something similarly self indulgent .

Listen to me rattling on like a 5am precoffee o'clock free-form write. Can you tell I just woke from a Sunday arvo nap?
That dog! I mean princess Billie had me up half the night.
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@girlbeforemirror,

All "art" is a dimension of self portraiture or perhaps in writing self projection.

Generally agreed ... although my fart poem, while grounded in reality, was a pretty long stretch from "Paul." :-)

That dog! I mean princess Billie had me up half the night.

That's called being ... a Mom. :-)

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