Ha ha, + I forgot to feedback on your wonderful poem. Just a short one today cause I just finished 4 hours solid editing that dtube film. It's adding the words that takes so long lol

I'm always really impressed by your unique metaphor in all of your poetry. For a little bit of constructive criticism, I think they can sometimes have a bit too much imagery but honestly, that might just be me. My favorite passage in this poem was

we're like omelettes in the battlefield,
mashed and meshed by unexpectations,
while waiting wearily for the rain

Such an unexpected but fantastic description :) Love it!