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RE: Before it ends (poem 3)
I'm just pushing you to write specifically... why is this the poem that only you could write? What pieces of yourself are lodged so deeply inside that they are inextricable?
If you are trying to share feelings, its best to share your specific ones.
Hey somethingsubtle,
It is the love and respect for all that is natural, for all beings.
We speak from the heart as we live and love.
These words are not mine, they are ours.
I like that you felt and saw the vagueness in this poem.
It is about feelings running through each other.
A feeling of apathy that sprung from the overwhelmed feelings and realization of life and death.
Poem 4, will be a more specific expression of feelings, just for you ;-)
Have a wonderful time brother.