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RE: Random Thoughts of Poetry ✍️ Untitled Poems#30

in #poetry7 years ago

It is well said or should i say typed :, I like how the poem starts from a calm state when it explains the man or the subject and his family especially tge wife, then turned into a complete chaos when all of the conflicts arise like the line "Some may seduce him to take Eternal rest" that is where temptation occurs BUT on the latter part he still chose to be with his family and thanked the almighty one that there is nothing to regret about his decision. Great post man!