This is really great @dflo. I especially like the use of similar words and lines to express completely different ideas (ie Stop the stress and let it leak out the sides.) and how it used multiple concurrent themes. I also especially enjoyed this part...

Feel the way up the stairs. What your body does with all its rooms. To meet the ones that cant come down here, who aren't even waiting anymore, flew away. Move the ravens wings inside your body to find the raven you may never find.
Move them through your organs up the concrete wooden metal step mindful walking up the brick wall up the waterworks down the hillside up the hill again.

Hope your reading went well!