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RE: 📕 Do not prohibit (Brilliant article, be sure to read)

in #prohibit8 years ago

A poignant piece of writing. I would suggest that the only acceptable prohibition is the one all of us have a right to; prohibiting others from using our property, starting without bodies and moving outward. In other words, the only prohibition is imposed by consent.

Just as a writing suggestion: try to use some formatting tools, such as bold, italics, and different headers to break up the text. I'd also try to pare down the bulk of text and make it a little more concise. It was quite a long article to get through.

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Thank you. I will try.