REVIEW REQUESTED: Virtual Card for my Niece Birthday

Community, I need your help. My niece has her birthday today and like to send here an unique birthday card, virtual since post will take to long from The Netherlands to Germany. She reached the age of 13. She likes princesses, little bit shinny stuff as well. I'm not that much of an art creation guy, but try my best.

What do you think of my creation below?

The text is in Dutch, something like "Wish you a very nice day...Euh...Due to the time of day...I hope you had a very nice day. Love Ed" note: it is already evening here, I'm in CET zone.

Please comment as honest as you can; Even if I should start redoing everything again.

Looking forward to your feedback!