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RE: SCN Shiritori # 10 ~ My First Attempt: E, N, T

in #shiritori7 years ago

I like the way the whiteness of the water in the glass carries the line of the napkin upward. I think that helps keep the point of focus on the front of the napkin. If it were white wine you have kept that feature while gaining a splash of color, but if it had been red wine I think the focal point in the picture might change a lot.

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Good point. I really learn a lot from an analysis like that. Thanks!

Any time. I like talking about art. Trying to do so, though, made me realize that I’ve lost a lot of vocabulary:) I rarely get the chance to talk about art and design anymore so all of those terms are drifting further and further into the outer reaches of my brain.