"Update #118: Writing Expedition , Have fun while writing ✍️, Literature; Poetry
Good day steemians, i trust we all had a good weekend. Thanks to @steemkidss for this writing expedition. I'll do my best this week. This is my first poem and i got the inspiration for this poem early this morning. I'd like to share now that it's fresh. You all are my first audience
Remember when we used to walk down the road
Wearing sweaters because of the cold
Little children of 16 years old
Who just found love in the city of Uyo
The nights we spent under the stars
Wishing that one day we'll buy you our own cars
Then take a road trip down to Mars
Nothing but love filled in our hearts
But suddenly, you changed
Spending time with you felt like a cage
Maybe it's because of your new friends at the arcade
Or your feelings for me just started to fade
I miss the old you
I miss when the love was so true
I swear I had no clue
That this is what we'd turn into
My pillows get soaked every night
When I cry with all my heart
Thinking if things would've been different if we fought
If we had spoken to the therapist in Trops
Now your health is failing you
I wish i was by your bed too
But you left me no choice than not to
I hope your breath doesn't leave you
Cause i would dread for you to die
Don't want to see them throwing sand in
Don't want to see them letting you down
The same way you always let me down
All i can do is pray for now
That you come back to me safe and sound
You coming back to me? I highly doubt
I guess I have to move on with my life in sight
I hope you enjoyed this piece. What explanation did you get from it? I'd love to know. Please share your thoughts in the comments. I invite my friends: @imohmitch , @precious9 , @bossj23 to participate.
Wow you write nicely
I'm not good in poetry
Thank you
This is actually my first time trying though.
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Omo at face I was thinking you lost someone not until I had to look at your title again.
In life we don't value our love ones until they depart that is when we start preaching love.
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