Update #118: Writing Expedition ✍️: Literature(stories, poetry, prose)/music recreation review: My story

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Hello my fellows friends and bloggers here, I know it has been a while since my last post on this very platform called steemit, and I really not happy anytime am offline in steemit platform cause me I will be missing so many contest with an interesting topics which will help me to interact with my fellow bloggers here and also learn new things from them.
And I will like to use this very opportunity that have come out to narrate a story based on the ongoing contest in this very community.

MY STORY

Hello guys, my story is all about a lady that got married to one man for like four (4) good years without conceiving talk more of giving birth. So her mother in-law and also the family of the husband was mad at her, abusing her every day by calling her a lot of bad names anytime that she visit them and because of this there was a conflict between the the family of the woman (which is the wife) and the family of the man (which is the husband).

And this result to the family of the man giving him so many ideas like “he should go and find a second wife and marry”, and for the man to do this, he have end the marriage by divorcing his wife.
But the man love his wife so much and the wife love him too, to the extent that the can’t leave each other no matter what, and all they were doing was to pray, and also visiting a lot of places looking for a solution to her problem that was not giving her peace of mind.

So one day, a friend of the woman came to her and was telling her story of one native doctor that she know that can help her and give her the fruit of the womb. And the woman reject that idea from her friend, because she believed that one day that the God that he serve will surely bless her with one.
And as time goes on one of the friend of the husband’s mother came to her and advised her that she should stop maltreating that her son’s wife and do the needful, and the woman asked what will she do that she has not done for her son’s wife to give her a grandchild, and the woman was like telling her to bring another wife and prepare a charm that her son will love that one and hate the first wife. And the mother in-law found it as a good advise and immediately she started working on it and succeeded in bringing in another wife for his son and causing conflict between the first wife and the husband that loved her so much before.

And the man totally hate everything about the woman, like he is no longer interested in tasting any of the woman food, and till the extent she sent the the first wife to the boys quarter and now love everything about the second wife which his mother brought for him.
And as time goes the mother was afraid that the charm may spoil one day and the don will realize what he is doing and go back to the main wife which is the first wife, so the mother brought an idea that they should send the first wife out of the compound entirely.
So the husband which did not know what he is doing, immediately send the woman out of the house back to the village where he married her from.
Then the second wife which is now the new wife started giving birth, her first issue was a girl and also is the second also, and immediately the mother of the man was not happy at all that the woman she married for her son has not given her a baby boy, and she starts developing a kind a hatred on where the second wife is, and that made her to condemn the native doctor that prepared a charm for her so that her son will hate the first wife and love the second wife and she stopped every sacrifice that she perform for the gods.

And the first wife which they sent back to the village have already start going to different churches asking God for help for her to go back to her husband, and the woman was feeling so dizzy at all times but when went for a medical checkup, the doctor told her that she was six months pregnant and she didn’t believe that until her belly started coming out showing she is pregnant, she wept bitterly thanking God for giving a child and also wishing that God will also take her back to her marriage.

And one day, the native doctor that made that charm for the husband’s mother came to remind and also warn her to come and fulfill the promise which she made to the gods, but the woman insist that can’t do it because the gods did not give her the way she asked it, and after some days the native doctor appeared again to the woman and warn the woman that the she is going to suffer if she did not come and fulfill her promise in the shrine, and the woman still insist, so after some days the charm stoped working and the man regained himself back, and start asking about his real wife, but nobody was giving him a good explanation so he called the wife number and the woman told him that she is in her parents house in the village, and immediately the man rushed down to village and met her there and apologized to the parents and the wife, and when he see that the wife was pregnant he was very happy and can’t wait to take her home back.

And when the reached home the mother and the second wife was at home and they saw that the first wife is pregnant and will give birth soon the mother knelt down and apologized to them and confess all that she did to them and immediately after the confession the native doctor appeared and struck the woman to death and she died.
So as the we’re still about to rush the woman to the hospital two police men came in and said that the two daughters that the second wife claimed that she gave birth to were all stolen and immediately the second wife confessed and the mother of the children took their children back and the second wife was arrested and the mother in-law was buried and the two couples lived home happily with a set of triplets two boys and a girl that the first wife gave birth to, and the lived happily forever.

moral lessons

We all have seen that it is not good to always run faster than our shadow, because the mother in-law was in a haste to have a child and take a decision that ended her life.

And secondly we should always learn to encourage people and not to discourage them in anytime they found themselves in any kind of situation which they are not comfortable with.

conclusions

All thanks to the lord for giving us a new day, and very happy for been able to see opportunity to drop an entry again in the steemit platform and to also in this very community.

Special mentions to @richy20, @bossj23 @ngoenyi, @goodybest and so many of them. My regards to you all.

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My dear friend thank you for sharing heart touching story with us it's common and happening in our society and more likely it destroys the life to have child wish. Please adjust your post.

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