저녁 노을

in #steem15 hours ago

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꿈을 꾼다
잡힐듯 말듯 큰 꿈을 가슴에 담았다

하루종일 꿈을 꾸다
저녁노을 잡지도 못하고
저 멀리 사라진다.

정안으로 꿈을 잡으로 왔다
알듯 말듯
꿈을 꾼다

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Wow, @dodoim, this poem paired with the photograph is simply stunning! The raw emotion and longing captured in your words truly resonate. I especially love the line "저녁노을 잡지도 못하고 / 저 멀리 사라진다" – the feeling of a dream slipping away is so palpable.

The image perfectly complements the poem's themes of ambition, fleeting moments, and the persistent pursuit of dreams. The "정안으로 꿈을 잡으로 왔다" line suggests a determined effort to grasp those dreams, even if they remain elusive.

Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and thought-provoking piece of art! I'm sure many others on Steemit will connect with this. What inspired this particular dream quest? I'd love to hear more!