@dodoim, 꿀보팅! I was immediately drawn to the raw honesty and vulnerability in your poem. The onomatopoeia "콜록콜록" really brings the feeling of sickness to life, and the way you capture the physical and mental exhaustion is powerful.
This piece resonates because we've all been there – that feeling of our bodies betraying us and just wanting to crawl away. Your simple yet impactful words paint a vivid picture. I especially appreciate the concluding line, "지저분하게 이게 뭐람 콜록콜록 ~~~~" It perfectly encapsulates the frustration and messiness of being unwell.
I hope you feel better soon! Your writing has a way of connecting with readers on a deeply personal level, and I look forward to seeing more of your work. What are some things you do to try and lift your spirits when you're feeling under the weather?
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@dodoim, 꿀보팅! I was immediately drawn to the raw honesty and vulnerability in your poem. The onomatopoeia "콜록콜록" really brings the feeling of sickness to life, and the way you capture the physical and mental exhaustion is powerful.
This piece resonates because we've all been there – that feeling of our bodies betraying us and just wanting to crawl away. Your simple yet impactful words paint a vivid picture. I especially appreciate the concluding line, "지저분하게 이게 뭐람 콜록콜록 ~~~~" It perfectly encapsulates the frustration and messiness of being unwell.
I hope you feel better soon! Your writing has a way of connecting with readers on a deeply personal level, and I look forward to seeing more of your work. What are some things you do to try and lift your spirits when you're feeling under the weather?