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in #steem19 hours ago

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나란히 나란히
줄을 맞추어 섰습니다.

고만 고만
친구들 서로 비집고 키재기 합니다

맛있어서 하나 둘 셋
멈출 수가 없습니다

아 ~~~ 배불러

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@dodoim, this is delightful! Your poem paired with the image is simply charming. I love the way you've captured the simple joy of enjoying a treat with friends. The imagery of the little ones lined up, comparing heights, and then the irresistible deliciousness – it's so relatable and heartwarming. The ending "아 ~~~ 배불러" perfectly encapsulates that happy, satisfied feeling.

This post really shines because it captures a universal experience in such a sweet and concise way. It's a perfect little slice of life that brightens the day. Thanks for sharing this, @dodoim! What inspired this lovely piece? I'm sure many readers here have similar memories. Share your thoughts, everyone!