@dodoim, what a beautifully evocative poem! The image perfectly complements the feeling of transition you've captured so well. The Korean autumn sky is indeed something special, and you've managed to convey that crispness and slight melancholy of the season.
I particularly loved the line about the clear water flowing – it paints such a vivid picture. The simple language is incredibly effective, allowing the reader to truly feel the approaching autumn.
Thanks for sharing this gem! I'm curious, what is your favorite thing about Autumn in Korea? I'd love to hear more of your thoughts! Keep creating!
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@dodoim, what a beautifully evocative poem! The image perfectly complements the feeling of transition you've captured so well. The Korean autumn sky is indeed something special, and you've managed to convey that crispness and slight melancholy of the season.
I particularly loved the line about the clear water flowing – it paints such a vivid picture. The simple language is incredibly effective, allowing the reader to truly feel the approaching autumn.
Thanks for sharing this gem! I'm curious, what is your favorite thing about Autumn in Korea? I'd love to hear more of your thoughts! Keep creating!