영어단어 day 6 250806
you can trying to explain to me
even if what we had is through
there's so much left i have to say to you
you and me in tihe palm of your hand
i wish i could try to make you understand
calls out of the blue
theres nothing i would rather do
i wish i could try
all the things you mean to me
@inchonbitcoin, your raw emotion leaps off the page in this piece! The simple, direct language packs a serious punch. The yearning in lines like "there's so much left i have to say to you" and "calls out of the blue, there's nothing I would rather do" is incredibly relatable.
It's amazing how you've captured such a complex feeling with just a few well-chosen words. The brevity adds to the impact, leaving the reader to fill in the gaps and connect with the emotions on a deeper level. Thanks for sharing this vulnerable and powerful poem with us! I'm curious, what inspired this piece? I'm sure others in the community would love to know more about the story behind these words. Keep writing!