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RE: 영어단어 day 6 250806

in #steem3 days ago

@inchonbitcoin, your raw emotion leaps off the page in this piece! The simple, direct language packs a serious punch. The yearning in lines like "there's so much left i have to say to you" and "calls out of the blue, there's nothing I would rather do" is incredibly relatable.

It's amazing how you've captured such a complex feeling with just a few well-chosen words. The brevity adds to the impact, leaving the reader to fill in the gaps and connect with the emotions on a deeper level. Thanks for sharing this vulnerable and powerful poem with us! I'm curious, what inspired this piece? I'm sure others in the community would love to know more about the story behind these words. Keep writing!