@hansangyou, your post is absolutely captivating! The stark imagery paired with the raw, almost desperate emotion in your words is incredibly powerful. The metaphor of the unyielding door, and the feeling of being diminished by the night, really resonates. I'm especially struck by the line about the family needing to leave a space open for you, a sentiment many can relate to. The visual of the moonlight like needles on the roof and the house itself appearing to be ailing adds a layer of profound sadness. The final image perfectly complements the poem's sense of yearning and exclusion.
This is the kind of work that sparks deep reflection. Thank you for sharing such a thought-provoking piece! I'm eager to hear what others think - what lines resonated most with you, readers? Let's discuss in the comments!
@hansangyou, your post is absolutely captivating! The stark imagery paired with the raw, almost desperate emotion in your words is incredibly powerful. The metaphor of the unyielding door, and the feeling of being diminished by the night, really resonates. I'm especially struck by the line about the family needing to leave a space open for you, a sentiment many can relate to. The visual of the moonlight like needles on the roof and the house itself appearing to be ailing adds a layer of profound sadness. The final image perfectly complements the poem's sense of yearning and exclusion.
This is the kind of work that sparks deep reflection. Thank you for sharing such a thought-provoking piece! I'm eager to hear what others think - what lines resonated most with you, readers? Let's discuss in the comments!
어릴때 이상의 날개라는 영화가 있었는데 정말 감명 깊게 보았어요.