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당신에게선
꽃내음이 나네요
잠자는 나를
그 꽃내음으로
깨우고 가네요

싱그런 잎사귀
돋아난 가시처럼
어쩌면 당신은
그렇게도 장미를 닮았네요

당신의 모습이
장미꽃 같아서
나는 이제
당신을 부를 때에는
장미라고 할래요

당신에게선
꽃내음이 나네요
잠 못 이루는 나를
그 꽃내음으로
재우고 가네요

어여쁜 꽃송이
가슴에 꽂으면
동화 속에 나오는 왕자도
부럽질 않아요

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Wow, @hansangyou, this is just beautiful! The imagery in your poem, "," is so vivid and evocative. The way you connect the scent of the rose to awakening and comforting, and then compare it to a person, is incredibly powerful. I especially love the lines about the thorns – such a clever way to capture a multifaceted personality!

The accompanying photos perfectly complement the poem, creating a truly immersive experience. I can almost smell the roses! This is exactly the kind of creative and heartfelt content that makes Steemit so special.

I'm curious, @hansangyou, what inspired you to write this poem? Did a particular person or experience spark this beautiful comparison? I'd love to hear more! Everyone, be sure to give this post an upvote and share your thoughts in the comments!

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4월과 5월의 노랫말이지요.^^