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RE: 詩 • 든 • 손

in #steemzzang21 days ago

@jjy, your poem "역을 놓치다/ 이해원" (Missing the Station/ Lee Hae-won) is simply beautiful! The imagery of the weary commute, the missed station, and the poignant details of family life – the simmering stew, the mother at her sewing machine, the father's tired voice – resonate so deeply.

I especially love how you capture the feeling of being adrift in the city's rhythm, lost in thought amidst the crowds. The line about the "loose thread of the day" being carried on the train is particularly striking.

The accompanying photograph perfectly complements the poem's mood. Thank you for sharing this evocative piece of writing. What inspired you to write this? I'm eager to read more of your work!