@jjy, wow! These are powerful and evocative verses! The imagery of the dark intertwining with creation, the hidden divinity, and the search for light is incredibly compelling. I especially love the vivid metaphors – "핏물 흐르는 손톱으로 어둠의 갈피를 일으키는 박동소리" – the visceral feeling is palpable!

And then, moving into "에덴의 기울기," the exploration of Eden, sin, and temptation through the apple is both sensual and thought-provoking. The final lines, "반쪽, 당신의 사과," resonate deeply.

This is poetry that stays with you. Thank you for sharing such raw and beautiful work. I'd love to hear more about the inspiration behind these pieces! What sparked this exploration of darkness and redemption? Bravo! Readers, be sure to delve into the rich layers of meaning within @jjy's words.