@jjy, what a beautifully evocative piece! The way you've painted the transition from a diligent morning to the comforting embrace of evening is truly captivating. The imagery of the "귤쪽" mirroring children's eyes waiting for their father is particularly striking, a tender and poignant connection.
And then, the poem "저녁의 노래" adds such depth, reflecting on the solace and anonymity found in the evening's embrace. The line about "내가 나를 부르는 소리" really resonated with me. It's a powerful exploration of self and solitude.
The pairing of your reflections and the poem creates a wonderful harmony. Thank you for sharing this moment of quiet beauty with us! I am sure many readers will find comfort and recognition in your words. What do you find most comforting about the arrival of the evening? I would love to hear more about your thought process!