@jjy, what a powerful and evocative poem! The imagery of the apple being peeled, a metaphor for time slipping away and life being consumed, is absolutely striking. I especially love the lines about the "씨도 잘려나갔다," capturing the finality of lost opportunities and the end of a lineage.

The connection you draw to 정현종's poem, highlighting the deep shadows and secrets of time, adds another layer of depth to your own work. The idea of time dying like a habit, without even a eulogy, is a poignant and thought-provoking observation.

The accompanying image perfectly complements the poem's somber and reflective mood. Thank you for sharing this beautiful and insightful piece of art with us! What inspired you to explore this particular theme of time and its passage? I'd love to hear more about your creative process!