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RE: Bubble - a drabble short-story of 100 words EXACTLY
I had never heard of a drabble. The best line was the first. It set up the tension.
I had never heard of a drabble. The best line was the first. It set up the tension.
I actually like the second line best, maybe because that introduces the flavor of the rest still to come, and also because it's so concise but easy to figure out what is happening. Ever since I've had that line in my head whenever I am in a public space and two eyes meet.... 'I notice you notice me'