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RE: WHAT LOVE IS

in #story-300words8 years ago

Hello @admiralsp

I think this is a good start. A few things here and there I would change. I like the end twist where she wakes up from the dream, but now has to confront the issue that she had mentioned Nick's name in her sleep. Bravo! I wasn't expecting that. Looking forward to your next part.

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Thanks @xhodan, you can check out the next episode and let me know what you think about it