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RE: Sleeping Volcano: The story of an Abused Teen
I prefer my stories in one place too. I think most people may not come back to finish the story if in sequel.
Well this story is as surprising as they come
A stepfather raping the step daughter.
A child having sexual feelings/relationship with another teen.
Definitely not a story suitable for kids.
Well written.
He had been working to slowly for her.
You may want to take a look at above sentence.
It really reduces the stress the reader would have to go through in completing it.
Strange but true! Things are things that can and do happen.
Funny enough, It's written by a kid and it's something kids go through.
That should be too instead of to. Thanks I'll edit it.
Thanks a lot for your time and beautiful comment. Sending you 0.10 sbd right now. It may be small but it's a token of my appreciation since my upvote isn't worth that much
Take back the 0.1SBD plus an added 0.9SBD :)
Ahnahn na .... Thanks a whole lot
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