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RE: Here's where I went - A Story

in #story7 years ago (edited)

Your wish is my command. SBI it is then. :)

And you know what, @penderis said that he and could suggest corrections or slight improvements to this next part. I was complaining to him that I'm really struggling with my vocabulary. Or the lack of it. Synonyms so that I wouldn't use the same words all the time. And so that the story would be a bit more colorful and interesting. So help in any way is appreciated. :)

You can blame @penderis for this mighty task! :D