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RE: A Darkness Below: Chapter 5

in #story8 years ago

This story is coming along really well! Thanks for the shoutout, but I feel I don't deserve the credit. All you, man :D

The dynamic and conversations stand as the strengths of this story. I really like how you scripted them. Simple and straight to the point. They really give all the characters their unique personalities. This is the shortest one by far, am I right? This seems like the perfect length for this story's chapters. Great job!

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Thank you, thank you! As always, I appreciate your input because you're consistently encouraging me to do more. :D

I thought that this would be a good length, and thankfully the chapter lent itself to being chopped up like this. Next one should be incoming shortly :D