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RE: [Story] City of the Damned ( Part I)
This is a nice effort. I like your imagery and your dialogue is very effective. Keep it up, a little polish on your grammar and you'll have some really solid writing here! @markrmorrisjr come visit me some time.
Thanks for the feedback. I know that my grammar is so and so, English is not my first language and I always make some mistakes here and there.