I liked that, did she know when she bought it, did someone just want to "look" at her when she bought it? Was she missing or the package missing? Was the "package" incidental to her missing? They had the time, and the place... A few ways this could go.
Also did you see:
The theme for this week is tension (emotional or physical). Want to give it a try? Write a short story using tension as the theme of your story. December 9th at midnight UTC we will start judging all the entries and our favorite will win 64.5 Steem!
You too @glenalbrethsen. I resteemed it if your interested. (I still dislike dropping other peoples post )
Hey, @bashadow. I did see themyarkymark's post. I'm actually trying to work on something. Hopefully have it crafted by Friday. Been a little distracted today and yesterday. :)
It's a nice prize. I was not sure if you or @themanwithnoname saw it go by. You are both good at the suspense short form.
Well, I very much appreciate you thinking of me, and I agree, it's an extremely nice prize, and one that sounds like it could be reoccurring, if other people continue to chip in for it. I think it's great.