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RE: Black Eyes - Tell a Story to Me
"Despavorido" was a translation error, which no matter how much I read and reread before publishing I don't notice it, I must be blind. Sorry about that.
"Despavorido" was a translation error, which no matter how much I read and reread before publishing I don't notice it, I must be blind. Sorry about that.
I read a bit of classic Japanese literature, some years ago, as part of a course. I thought you captured the sense of the culture very nicely here. Your story reminded me of my readings. Made the story interesting.
Respect :)