"AFTER THE NIGHT NOISES" /// SUSPENSE STORY

in #terror • 5 years ago


WHEN WE CHALLENGE THE NIGHT NOT TO FOLLOW OUR INSTINCTS, WITHOUT GIVING IMPORTANCE TO ANY LITTLE INDICATION, AT THAT MOMENT WE MAY HAVE TO WATCH... SO YOU DON'T WANT IT.

This is my participation in a contest of the suspense or terror story of the friends of @FUERZAHISPANA, I continue to insist that it is the genre that I like the least and bear in mind that because of you I will have nightmares jijiji

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And this is the story:


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AFTER THE NIGHT NOISES
She was always used to crowds and very rarely gave in to disconnecting from the world. This was how a well-known sound made her retake her faithful ally, a vibrating cell phone interrupted the low sound of the television.

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Every sound began to make itself felt, as if the night wanted to speak, whisper in your ear that something could be wrong.

Veronica hears the bathroom door close and a faint breeze brushing her arms. Being the most logical thing that he thought that his mother would have been and that for being so concentrated he had not felt it happen.

He continues completely unprepared by sending the voice messages that have kept him so entertained during the beginning of this night.

She is startled to feel regret the door of the fridge knock. A little tired of being scared by her mother for the second time, she raised her voice to complain and when she did not get an answer she was attentive, somewhat confused by these coincidences.

Decide to tell your friend what happened, another sudden breeze recorded his arm as he recorded the last voice message.
César le dice que no hay motivos para ponerse nervioso si tenía a su hermana justo a su lado. Verónica sumamente confundida me Cesar tells him that there is no reason to be nervous if he had his sister right next to him. Veronica extremely confused asks me why those things. After a few seconds we received the answer that he would least expect, when César indicated to him that in the background of the audio he heard a female voice. He hurried to listen to the message he had sent and his skin prickles when he details the sound of another voice whispering:

MÍRAME... Mírame... mírame...

When she already felt that calm was returning to her present, Veronica felt that her mother was calling her from the room and confident that she would get comfort by telling her the way there.

Just before you get to the room, watch the light on the nightstand inside go out. Darkness reigns everywhere in the hall. Only a dim moonlight that allowed the silhouette of objects to be seen, at least enough not to fall.

She sighed as she looked at her mother's silhouette between the sheets and entered the room, only one step, when she observes a human figure, darker than the room without light.

Watching as he got out of bed his muscles did not react. Veronica felt a chill in her body that activated her senses and made her aware that the shadow was approaching her.
Sin notarlo sus pies la habían llevado hacia la sala y sus manos habían tocado cada encendedor de las luces, como quien intenta por completo eliminar la Without noticing it, her feet had led her into the living room and her hands had touched each lighter of the lights, like someone trying to completely eliminate the darkness. The tremor in his hands holding the cell phone, not knowing how an audio had already been sent and another in response was coming. He begged his friend not to fall asleep and to distract his mind from those ideas.

Sweaty their hands and noticing the cell phone fallen on the floor, far from their reach, they decided to leave the doubts.

She turned and everything she saw chilled his blood. Deep eyes a few inches from her face, a girl's body looking so hard, her features turning into an expression of annoyance.

Veronica's world was fading and everything that looked at the dark mist invading her vision.


FIN


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