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RE: Adverbs: Do You Honestly Need Them?
She raised her eyelids so slowly it would be hard to see the movement.
perhaps:
She raised her eyelids like a sunrise over the ocean; a blush of movement unnoticed, even when staring directly into it.
I am enjoying this series so much! Keep 'em coming!
Thank you John. But here, the modifier is a sentence. I'm looking for something more minimalist for that particular scene. Would love to discuss it with you with more context if and when you feel up to it.
Can I steal this for another one though?
Next TT is planned tonight actually. ;-)
It is yours to use or discard!
I will try to be there... :/