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RE: An honest review of the Privacy Friendly 2048 game app

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Hello, @chrisbarth!

Thank you for your contribution to Utopian. I love games with educational value, and this is one of my favorites. Even though there's not much to learn by playing this game, I do believe that it's good brain practice. The project is simple to use, and I think that you did a good job of highlighting the key aspects of the game. Keep up the good work.

On the content side, you did a good job. The post contains all the necessary information about the project itself, and I appreciate the fact that you took the time to explain the basics of the game. Your content is unique and editorial, and this is the kind of content we like to see in blog posts.

However, there were issues of style and proofreading, but not to the level where it hurt the readability of your text. I'd be happy to point out a few of those in a follow-up comment, if you wish. Nevertheless, you managed to compose a succinct review that includes all the necessary details, and I appreciate the effort.

I look forward to your next contribution.

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Hello, thanks for your review. Please cite the issues so I could learn from them.

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Hey!

I will cite a few examples:

There are a lot of cool stuff over there.

This one should read: "There is a lot of cool stuff over there."

Just in case the player wishes to undo his last step, he/she can do that by clicking on the icon below 'points'.

This one would be a better sentence: "Just in case the player wishes to undo their last step, they can do that by clicking on the icon below 'points'." In general, you can use "they/their/theirs" in cases where there's no information in regard to an individual's gender.

I hope you will find this comment useful.

Thanks! It was quite helpful.

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Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!