RE: NextCloud- Getting MySelf Used To Some Advanced Features (Part 2)
Hello @rufans!
Thank you for your contribution. This is a great project, and I think I know who that convinced user actually is. As I have said in the past, some of the features are really impressive. Your post is informative and well-illustrated with relevant graphic content.
Once again, you managed to create a blog post that contains useful information about the project, and even includes your personal knowledge, views and experience of using this tool. I also appreciate the fact that you took the time to share some useful examples.
That said, there were serious issues of style and proofreading, making your text difficult to comprehend at times. I could offer a few examples in a follow-up comment if you would like me to. Furthermore, please do keep in mind that you must always capitalize the first-person pronoun, I.
Regardless, I think that you did a good job. I enjoyed reading your review, and look forward to reading the next part of this series.
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Thank you for the review.
I'd love to know more about the issues of style and proofreading I have been missing. Thanks
I will provide a few examples for you:
This sentence should read: ''Have you ever come across apps that don't allow you to take screenshots or make a screen recording while using them?''
This is a bad sentence, this would be much better: ''I gave a detailed introduction and shared information on how to get it successfully installed on Android."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Have a good day.
Very helpful ☺️. Thanks for your time.
My pleasure, keep up the good work!
Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!