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RE: SLC-S25/W2 | Community World Tour: Festivals & Celebrations
Thank you @peachyladiva for your touching and beautifully reflective contribution to Week 2 of the Community World Tour: Festivals & Celebrations!
Below is your detailed evaluation based on the official 10-point criteria:
Evaluation Summary
Criteria | Score | Comments |
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1. Narrative & Emotion | 2.25 / 2.5 | A deeply heartfelt and well-written account of a personal transformation through cultural celebration. Emotionally rich and authentically conveyed. |
2. Holiday Presentation | 1.5 / 2.0 | The Cultural Day was nicely described, with emphasis on regional representation and children’s performances. A bit more historical/cultural background would help. |
3. Location + SteemAtlas | 1.0 / 1.0 | Abuja is clearly indicated and the SteemAtlas marker is included. |
4. Photographic Media | 1.0 / 1.0 | Strong visual storytelling with original and expressive photos from the celebration. Very good documentation. |
5. “Type Less Smile More” Phrase | 1.0 / 1.0 | The quote “A child who knows where they come from walks taller into the future” is both beautiful and meaningful. |
6. Community Interaction | 1.0 / 1.0 | Interacted in the comments and invited three other users. Shows a warm, engaged presence. |
7. Video via Speak on Steem | 1.0 / 1.5 | The video was uploaded on Speem, but it's brief and lacks immersive footage. |
Final Score: 8.75 / 10
Remarks:
A beautifully sincere entry that captures the emotional power of showing up for loved ones and celebrating heritage in small, meaningful ways. The storytelling is elegant and the message resonates beyond the event itself. For an even higher score, consider including a richer contextual description of the celebration and a more immersive video.
Thank you for sharing your heart and culture so gracefully!
– Community World Tour Jury
Thank you so much for your feedback. I always look forward to your detailed feedback.